What the hell is a "cheap homer"? Is that what his Oakland teams hit when they were roided up?
You take advantage of the park dimensions and conditions whenever you can.
I'd switch Machado out for Harper, as right field has killed us even more than 3B (though Moncada is well on his way to making both awful). Otherwise I think this is solid.
I would also add:
5) Lacking and/or not recognizing proper depth for the outfield and bullpen
As much as I like Liam trading him might be a smart idea. You’ve got some solid bullpen guys who can take the 9th (Graveman, Reylo), you clear up that salary and maybe get some nice pieces.