BobDylan Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 I've started a screenplay, and for the first time in awhile, I'm really excited about what I've stared. I'm hoping to get some other opinions, so I put what I've wrote so far onto the internet. PDF | Text Only If you read it, be honest in your opinions. I can take it, believe me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wise Master Buehrle Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 Nice cliffhanger you quadstack. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BobDylan Posted September 5, 2004 Author Share Posted September 5, 2004 What? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BobDylan Posted September 5, 2004 Author Share Posted September 5, 2004 It's not finished, if you didn't realize... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dasox24 Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 I like it so far. I see shades of Pulp Fiction in that you talk about uncomfortable silence and Anthony says "what?" a lot like that dude in P.F. when being interrogated (who eventually gets shot b/c he says "what?" too many times, lol). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AssHatSoxFan Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 i thought that maybe when clem came out it was going to turn porno on me and a three way was about to start Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wise Master Buehrle Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 i thought that maybe when clem came out it was going to turn porno on me and a three way was about to start LMAO me too.. There were actually a few times I thought things like that would happen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AssHatSoxFan Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 if you want bobdylan we can turn this inot a porno quite easily Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LDF Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 I've started a screenplay, and for the first time in awhile, I'm really excited about what I've stared. I'm hoping to get some other opinions, so I put what I've wrote so far onto the internet. PDF | Text Only If you read it, be honest in your opinions. I can take it, believe me. i tried to read it and i have never read what a script is suppose to be like. so i don't know what to look for. in all honesty, i hope this come to be, i hope you get all the success you want. if it was a book, then i can give you an opinion. good luck peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BobDylan Posted September 5, 2004 Author Share Posted September 5, 2004 if you want bobdylan we can turn this inot a porno quite easily Maybe I'll write a second version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BobDylan Posted September 5, 2004 Author Share Posted September 5, 2004 i tried to read it and i have never read what a script is suppose to be like. so i don't know what to look for. in all honesty, i hope this come to be, i hope you get all the success you want. if it was a book, then i can give you an opinion. good luck peace Reading screenplays is different, it certainly takes more of a visionary reader. The way I learned to read them was to watch a movie, and read the screenplay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BobDylan Posted September 6, 2004 Author Share Posted September 6, 2004 There are about 10 new pages, if anyone is interested. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesoxfan99 Posted September 6, 2004 Share Posted September 6, 2004 I liked it so far but a quick question, I know its not finished so it might get explained later, but how does Anthony get back in touch with Cheryl if the number was incorrect and he keeps getting the operator? Side note, the beginning reminds me a lot of Eternal Sunshine not necessarily a bad thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AssHatSoxFan Posted September 6, 2004 Share Posted September 6, 2004 There are about 10 new pages, if anyone is interested. its hard to say if its good because i really dont know where you are going but it seems good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BobDylan Posted September 6, 2004 Author Share Posted September 6, 2004 I liked it so far but a quick question, I know its not finished so it might get explained later, but how does Anthony get back in touch with Cheryl if the number was incorrect and he keeps getting the operator? Side note, the beginning reminds me a lot of Eternal Sunshine not necessarily a bad thing. It'll be explained later. : ) And much of the inspiration is from Eternal Sunshine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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